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My Portfolio Vs. 6

So this is my next portfolio design. Designed and coded, by hand, by me. It's about 30+ HTML pages. See it live here. I kept the same style as vs. 5 because I liked that about that design but made vast changes to improve it.

Comments, and especially critiques are welcome... though I recommend you see it live before critiquing.

Thanks.

2009, Jordan Michael | My Website

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:iconcrazyamazinglisa:
My critique is going to go here because I don't consider myself experienced enough in the critique field to leave one all professional like haha, so this would be my critique: This looks beautiful, professional, clean and well organized. It is very appealing to the eye... The only critique I have visually is regarding the light area that says "welcome to the online..." I think that area either needs to be stretched to match the length of the dark blue "experience the difference..." area OR you can keep the light "welcome to the online..." area it's size, BUT you'd have to make the top "Jordan Michael" area the same size as the "welcome..." area and fill the two corners in with the same grey area as the boarder is. Do you follow me? hehee.. Otherwise, nicely done.

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:iconlordreserei:
Nice and clean design with nothing to distract you from what you're wanting to look at, easy to navigate layout.

Kept me reading more and more as I went along, there's a lot of sites like yours which are filled with information that I've in the past to be boring, almost robotic and made me leave not a minute after going to it.

Yours didn't/doesn't fall into that, for example, you really demonstrate your passion for what you do on the homepage and your bio which is great!...because I know that if someone were to work for me or I hired a freelancer, I wouldn't want a robot, would want someone who were genuinely passionate about what they did.

Either way, to get to the point....5/5 all around, I like it a lot. =)
:icontrevownz:
Well I think you need more color first of all. If you want the colorless look that is fine. Also it seems like it is just words. I like websites to be full of stuff... just my opinion.

I noticed your shop has been closed sense the first time I went to your site. If you need help I figured out how to do paypal on a website =]

I'm catching up aren't I?

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I think it's great, it's really eaasy to find what you're looking for (had a look at your dock icons!), and the layout and colours are just great! :D

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:iconbadboythemer:
sorry not feeling this one, it seems soo bleak and depressing, your design style is vibrant, and i feel a designers site should reflect who they are personality wise, this just tells me your boring ;)

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Don't be sorry. For the next design I'll do something different. Just didn't feel like redoing all the coding and stuff.

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